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DesiTiger   
Member since: Aug 03
Posts: 1205
Location: Mississauga

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 06-03-05 16:35:15

Here is another one from my repoitre :D


Eyes

I watch the early morning sun
feel the gentle morning breeze
and watch the sun reflect your eyes
of shining, shimmering Green
laughing, dancing deep pools
with dreams yet unseen.

The Noon sun is riding high
I watch a glorious day unfold
and watch the sun reflect your eyes
of brightly blazing Gold
luminous spheres, enmeshed with light
and secrets yet untold

The evening hour is nigh at hand
yet enchanted I do stand
and watch the sun reflect your eyes
of soothing china Blue
crystal orbs with swirling clouds
and colors changing hue


Bachelor CDs, feel free to use this to woo a Canadian Gori :D


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Brown Girl   
Member since: Feb 05
Posts: 86
Location: London, ON

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 07-03-05 10:11:53

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Desi Tiger, I really enjoyed reading your poem, thought it was romantic, but how about a sonnet for us ladies with big brown eyes?


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Brown Girl   
Member since: Feb 05
Posts: 86
Location: London, ON

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 07-03-05 10:14:41

Quote:
Orginally posted by Silky

I use to do poetry too for my boyfriend, not any more because my boyfriend is now my husband....... This is one very simple one I wrote when we completed 1000 days being in love. Silly me, use to count days like mad.......

It started with a gaze
Then soon became a maze
But you shattered all the haze
And proved by all the ways
That true love always stays
And devotion always pays
To fill the heart with craze
That it sings and dance and prays
To God and thanks his grace
That we shared these 1000 days.

:)




Hi Silky,

Very sweet poem. I used to do silly things like count the days too. That was until I met my hubby, it was when I was dating him that I realised that it's not the quantity of time I spent with him but the quality of it. I would have had one happy day with him than 100 not-so-happy ones.

Love to hear some more of your work.
:)


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DesiTiger   
Member since: Aug 03
Posts: 1205
Location: Mississauga

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 08-03-05 16:42:09

A Vikram Seth Tickler :D

You don't Love me anymore?
Oh God!
Oh Sh#t!
You still respect me?
Thanks! I certainly value it.
But sadly to me, it is of as much use
as is to give a man a new hat
when what he really needs
is a Pair of Shoes :D


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mercury6   
Member since: Jan 04
Posts: 2025
Location: State of Denial

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 26-03-05 14:00:52

The sun has been out for a few days now....Reminds me of this song.

Here comes the sun,
Here comes the sun, and I say
It's all right

Little darling
It's been a long cold lonely winter
Little darling
It feels like years since it's been here

Here comes the sun,
Here comes the sun, and I say
It's all right

Little darling
The smiles returning to the faces
Little darling
I seems like years since it's been here

Here comes the sun,
Here comes the sun, and I say
It's all right

Sun, sun, sun, here it comes
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes

Little darling
I feel that ice is slowly melting
Little darling
It seems like years since it's been clear

Here comes the sun,
Here comes the sun, and I say
It's all right
Here comes the sun,
Here comes the sun
It's all right
It's all right

:cool:

EDIT: removed cheesy " do do do do" part.:)


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my2cents   
Member since: May 04
Posts: 260
Location: Miss, Canada

Post ID: #PID Posted on: 08-03-06 12:43:41

I have always felt that women are a mass of contradictions. This poem reinforces my view.


:D

http://web.mid-day.com/News/City/2006/March/132549.htm


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