I never take risk while drinking
>
>When I come from office in the evening, wife is cooking
>I can hear the noise of utensils in the kitchen
>I stealthily enter the house
>Take out the bottle from my black cupboard
>Shivaji Maharaj is looking at me from the photo frame
>But still no one is aware of it
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I take out the glass from the rack above the old sink
>Quickly enjoy one peg
>Wash the glass and again keep it on the rack
>Of course I also keep the bottle inside my cupboard
>Shivaji Maharaj is giving a smile
>
>I peep into the kitchen
>Wife is cutting potatoes
>No one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: Any news on Iyer's daughter's marriage
>Wife: Nope, she doesn't seem to be that lucky. Still they are looking
>out for her
>
>I again come out; there is a small noise of the black cupboard But I
>don't make any sound while taking out the bottle I take out the glass
>from the old rack above sink Quickly enjoy one peg
>
>Wash the bottle and keep it in the sink
>Also keep the Black Glass in the cupboard
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: But still I think Iyer's daughter's age is not that much
>Wife: What are you saying? She is 28 yrs old... like an aged horse
>I: (I forgot her age is 28) Oh Oh...
>
>I again take out potatoes out from my black cupboard
>But the cupboard's place has automatically changed
>I take out the bottle from the rack and quickly enjoy one peg in the
>sink
>
>Shivaji Maharaj laughs loudly
>I keep the rack in the potatoes & wash Shivaji Maharaj's photo & keep it
>in the black cupboard
>
>Wife is keeping the sink on the stove
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: (getting angry) you call Mr. Iyer a horse? If you say that again, I
>will cut your tongue...!
>Wife: Don't just blabber something, go out and sit quietly...
>
>I take out the bottle from the potatoes
>Go in the black cupboard and enjoy a peg
>Wash the sink and keep it over the rack
>Wife is giving a smile
>
>Shivaji Maharaj is still cooking
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: (laughing) So Iyer is marrying a horse!!
>Wife: Hey go and sprinkle some water on your face...
>
>I again go to the kitchen, and quietly sit on the rack
>Stove is also on the rack
>There is a small noise of bottles from the room outside
>
>I peep and see that wife is enjoying a peg in the sink
>But none of the horses are aware of what I did
>Becoz Shivaji Maharaj never takes a risk
>
>Iyer is still cooking
>And I am looking at my wife from the photo and laughing
>Becoz I never take
>
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>legally
>privileged.
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Orginally posted by sanjeevm
I never take risk while drinking
>
>When I come from office in the evening, wife is cooking
>I can hear the noise of utensils in the kitchen
>I stealthily enter the house
>Take out the bottle from my black cupboard
>Shivaji Maharaj is looking at me from the photo frame
>But still no one is aware of it
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I take out the glass from the rack above the old sink
>Quickly enjoy one peg
>Wash the glass and again keep it on the rack
>Of course I also keep the bottle inside my cupboard
>Shivaji Maharaj is giving a smile
>
>I peep into the kitchen
>Wife is cutting potatoes
>No one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: Any news on Iyer's daughter's marriage
>Wife: Nope, she doesn't seem to be that lucky. Still they are looking
>out for her
>
>I again come out; there is a small noise of the black cupboard But I
>don't make any sound while taking out the bottle I take out the glass
>from the old rack above sink Quickly enjoy one peg
>
>Wash the bottle and keep it in the sink
>Also keep the Black Glass in the cupboard
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: But still I think Iyer's daughter's age is not that much
>Wife: What are you saying? She is 28 yrs old... like an aged horse
>I: (I forgot her age is 28) Oh Oh...
>
>I again take out potatoes out from my black cupboard
>But the cupboard's place has automatically changed
>I take out the bottle from the rack and quickly enjoy one peg in the
>sink
>
>Shivaji Maharaj laughs loudly
>I keep the rack in the potatoes & wash Shivaji Maharaj's photo & keep it
>in the black cupboard
>
>Wife is keeping the sink on the stove
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: (getting angry) you call Mr. Iyer a horse? If you say that again, I
>will cut your tongue...!
>Wife: Don't just blabber something, go out and sit quietly...
>
>I take out the bottle from the potatoes
>Go in the black cupboard and enjoy a peg
>Wash the sink and keep it over the rack
>Wife is giving a smile
>
>Shivaji Maharaj is still cooking
>But still no one is aware of what I did
>Becoz I never take a risk
>
>I: (laughing) So Iyer is marrying a horse!!
>Wife: Hey go and sprinkle some water on your face...
>
>I again go to the kitchen, and quietly sit on the rack
>Stove is also on the rack
>There is a small noise of bottles from the room outside
>
>I peep and see that wife is enjoying a peg in the sink
>But none of the horses are aware of what I did
>Becoz Shivaji Maharaj never takes a risk
>
>Iyer is still cooking
>And I am looking at my wife from the photo and laughing
>Becoz I never take
>
>**********************************************************************
>The information, hic! in this message, hic! is confidential and may be
>legally
>privileged.
Hey SanjeevM
Did you write that yourself? What an excellent way to portray the effects of drinking alcohol!! I enjoyed reading that one. It ahd a somewhat lighthearted, yet serious approach to the subject, really good.
You might be interested in reading the work thats been posted on the thread "Poems for your Reading Pleasure" There's some good stuff on there too.
Keep it up!
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Hey SanjeevM
Did you write that yourself? What an excellent way to portray the effects of drinking alcohol!! I enjoyed reading that one. It ahd a somewhat lighthearted, yet serious approach to the subject, really good.
You might be interested in reading the work thats been posted on the thread "Poems for your Reading Pleasure" There's some good stuff on there too.
Keep it up!
Hi guys,
Good to know that u liked it but to be very honest with you: I did not write this but I did enjoy reading it.
I just can't write poetry. I used to write articles and columns but that was long time back. Once I wrote a 'sher'
which was MY ONLY poetry. It goes like:Ab main samjha tere rukhsaar pe laaliyon ka sabab,
Na jaane kitne dilon ka khoon yahan hu hoga!
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Sanjeev Manocha, MBA
Real Estate Sales Representative
Accredited Buyer Representative (ABR)
Re/Max West Realty Inc, Brokerage
96, Rexdale Blvd., Toronto
Mobile: 416-843-7600
Office: 416-745-2300
http://www.manocharealty.com" rel="nofollow">LINK
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Orginally posted by sanjeevm
Hi guys,
Good to know that u liked it but to be very honest with you: I did not write this but I did enjoy reading it.
I just can't write poetry. I used to write articles and columns but that was long time back. Once I wrote a 'sher'
Ab main samjha tere rukhsaar pe laaliyon ka sabab,
Na jaane kitne dilon ka khoon yahan hu hoga!
Wah Wah! Irshaad!
But the first one - do you call that poetry? Just because you end each para with the same phrase does it become poetry? Oh then I think I too can write poetry!
Chandresh
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This is Modern Poetry Chandreshji....
just like Modern Art
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Sanjeev Manocha, MBA
Real Estate Sales Representative
Accredited Buyer Representative (ABR)
Re/Max West Realty Inc, Brokerage
96, Rexdale Blvd., Toronto
Mobile: 416-843-7600
Office: 416-745-2300
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Location: Toronto , ontario , ca
Posted on: 11-03-05 00:03:57
so we will also appreciate in a modern way by saying irsaad 8-10 times during the poetry is being said
Howz that.
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